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Cold email templates for solo founders, with the one line you write yourself

Every template on the internet has the same weak spot: the opening line is a blank, and that blank is the whole email. These four tell you what goes in it, where to find it, and how to say it in one sentence.

MBy Motyar, who builds ScoutKite

yoursYour newsletter's issue on wholesale pricing said most bakeries undercharge cafés by a third.

I built a pricing sheet tool for small bakeries, so wholesale prices update when flour does.

Would that be useful for your readers' shops?

1 · a true fact2 · what you do3 · one question

Why a fact beats a clever opener

Founders tend to write cold email the way they pitch investors: problem, solution, traction, ask. It reads well and gets ignored, because the person on the other end didn't ask for a pitch. What earns the next ten seconds of their attention is proof you looked at them in particular.

A compliment doesn't do that ("love what you're building" fits everyone). A question doesn't either ("are you struggling with X?" is a guess). A fact does. Something from their site, their newsletter, their timetable, that they can check in seconds. Once they've seen it, the second sentence (what you do) gets read as relevant instead of as an ad.

In each template below, the highlighted line is the one only you can write. Everything else is scaffolding.

Template 01

They just announced something

Use when their site or newsletter mentions something new: a second location, a launch, a new service, new hours.

The line you write: The fact has to be news they shared themselves. Then say what it means for them in their words, not yours: "two tills", not "multi-location revenue reconciliation".

Subject: [the thing they announced]
Hi [first name],

Saw that you've [the thing they announced], so [what it means for their customers or their week].

I'm building [your product in a few words] for [kind of business] going through exactly that, so [the one result it gives them]. Would that be useful right now?

[Your name]
Template 02

Something on their site you can help with

Use when you can see a gap your product fills: booking by phone only, a PDF menu, a full waitlist, no way to buy online.

The line you write: Frame it as what their customers could gain, never as something wrong. "People finding you after 6pm could book on the spot" lands; "your site has no booking" doesn't.

Subject: [the page or feature]
Hi [first name],

Your [page or feature] [what you noticed], so [what their customers could do if it changed].

I make [your product], which [what it does about exactly that]. Would that help with [their business name]?

[Your name]
Template 03

They look like your best customer

Use when they're very like a customer you already have. Only name the customer if they've agreed to it.

The line you write: Pick the one detail that makes them like your customer: same kind of classes, same busy season, same way of selling. "You're also a small business" isn't a detail.

Subject: Like [customer type]
Hi [first name],

I noticed you [something specific they do], which is exactly how [a customer of yours, or 'a studio we work with'] runs too.

They use [your product] to [the one result they get]. Would it be worth a look for [their business name]?

[Your name]
Template 04

They make something people read or watch

Use for newsletter writers, podcasters, YouTubers, bloggers: they publish an address on their about or media-kit page.

The line you write: Quote one concrete point from their work, not "loved your latest post". Creators can tell in a second whether you read it.

Subject: Your [issue / episode] on [topic]
Hi [first name],

Your [issue / episode] on [topic] [one specific thing from it, not praise].

I built [your product] for [kind of creator], so [the one result it gives them]. Would that be useful for [their publication]?

[Your name]

How to adapt each template per prospect

  1. Spend two minutes on their site before you touch the template. About page, the newest thing on the homepage, the contact page. Pick one fact. If nothing's there, skip them.
  2. Write the highlighted line first, from scratch. Don't edit the bracket text into shape; it'll read like a filled-in form.
  3. Make the second sentence about that fact. Your product does many things. In this email it does the one thing that connects to what you just said.
  4. Read it out loud. If you wouldn't say it to them across a counter, change it.
  5. Send from your own inbox, a few at a time. Twenty-five careful emails a day from your normal address will do more than five hundred from a fresh domain.

Want to check a draft before you send it? Paste it into the cold email checker for spam words, length and the ask. For follow-ups, the follow-up writer gives you two that each add something new.

Skip the template: let ScoutKite draft from their site

The two minutes per prospect is the part that doesn't scale. ScoutKite does it for you: it finds people like your customers who published their own email, reads each site, and writes the highlighted line (and the rest) from one fact it found there, with a link to the page so you can check it. You approve every draft. More examples by trade are on the templates page.

Questions

Questions people ask

How long should a cold email from a founder be?

Under 80 words, and under 60 is better. Three short paragraphs: the fact about them, what you do about it, the question. If you need more to explain your product, the product explanation belongs in the reply.

Should I say I'm the founder?

You can, in the sign-off: "Sam, founder of Tillsmith". Don't make it the opening. "I'm the founder of…" is about you, and the first line should be about them.

Should I include a link or a demo video?

Not in the first email. Links make spam filters more suspicious of a message from a new sender, and they ask for a click before the person has said they care. Offer it when they reply.

How many follow-ups should I send?

One, three or four days later, adding one new useful detail, then stop. A reply, even "not now", stops everything.

What if I can't find anything true to say about them?

Then don't email them. A template filled with a vague fact ("I see you're in the fitness industry") does more harm than skipping them. ScoutKite works the same way: if it finds nothing real on someone's site, it skips them and you aren't charged.

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